It feels a bit empty,
the cage called heart ...
I need to have something to fill in
Come and end it all,
you american soldier
Ride the army jets,
shed some blood
I don't mind,
I don't care,
If it's you who ends this life of mine.
Tunnel Vision (Limerick)
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“I’m afraid of long tunnels! Can’t do it,”Said a claustrophobe. “Stop, or
you’ll rue it!”“Close your eyes and don’t whine,”Said his wife. “You’ll be
fine!Y...
1 day ago
2 comments:
I really want to criticize you. Can I, if I cant find a fault? This is pefect.
You dont care about my comments in other poems, this one surpasses the 'WHO' which was my favourite.
I care about EVERY comment.
Thank you!
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