It feels a bit empty,
the cage called heart ...
I need to have something to fill in
Come and end it all,
you american soldier
Ride the army jets,
shed some blood
I don't mind,
I don't care,
If it's you who ends this life of mine.
Is Hatred Unhealthy? (Limerick)
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Some maintain that it’s toxic to hateAnd that loathing just makes you
irate.While that might well be true,Someone vile (you know who)Deserves
both and much...
5 hours ago
2 comments:
I really want to criticize you. Can I, if I cant find a fault? This is pefect.
You dont care about my comments in other poems, this one surpasses the 'WHO' which was my favourite.
I care about EVERY comment.
Thank you!
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