The bitter chocolate

Once upon a time, many many years ago
when the stars were brighter and the birds happier singing so

there lived two people in love
the sky shining over them from above

Such days they had and such nights
yielding words in each other's soft syllables and melted hearts

many times he wished he could stop the clock
to hold and freeze those hasty tick and tock

and came the time to say bye
to leave the world with a sigh

so temporary; so soon; so short the end seemed to appear
the sweet moments blending up in tear

leaving the other one in grief; the destiny unkind
what’s more bitter than being left behind?

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Kuan Gung said...

Very, very touching Othersideblue...very good images, emotions and great do have a great pen, writers have a great passion and you've put that on display here...thank you!

Keshi said...

sad indeed to be left behind. But we all get left behind in one way or the other...


Othersideblue said...

Thanks to you for the nice comment encouraging me to write.

Othersideblue said...

I would change the rule if I had the choice.

A.H.ROSTAMI said...

Very good writing.
Yes, it is a fate of most of us. No way to escape, that is the life, here in this world.
Take care.
God bless us.

Othersideblue said...

yes, this is kind of fate waiting for most and am a bit selfish considering the subject.
I want to go first

starry nights said...

Sad, but we all have to sayy good bye.beautifully written.

Othersideblue said...

Starry nights,
It is so
The unavoidable truth
We all have to.
Thanks for the compliment.

A.H.ROSTAMI said...

Dear Othersideblue
Your subject is very good, it remind us our possible fate.

A.H.ROSTAMI said...

Hello again
I wish you will never go that way.

Kuan Gung said...

This gets better everytime I read it...there's a mixture of sadness and joy here...